只改 * 號部分：
*Sam and Simon went to camping last weekend, (刪 to)
*but everything went wrongly. They had a very (wrongly --> wrong)
unpleasant time. They went to a quite part of
*Lantau. As soon as they got there, it started (as soon as)
*raining, and never stopped for twenty-four hours. (ever --> never)
*The field became very muddy. They could not light (cannot --> could not)
*a fire to cook their food.They were very (for --> to)
hungry as you cannot to eat uncooked sausages.
*Sam tried to listen to his walkman, but the (listen to)
*batteries ran out, so he could not. Simon had (ran off --> ran out)
brought some tins of the tuna, but he had
forgot a can-opener, so they could not eat any
*of them. He also had a pack of cards, but for (it --> them)
*some reason there were only 43 cards, so they (even --> only)
could not play properly. They tried to go to sleep,
*but at the midnight they were woken up by (刪 the)
a large number of stray dogs that came for
investigate who they were. They very afraid.
About dawn dogs went away and the cold
hungry boys set on for home. They would not
*go camping again for a long time. (for a long time)
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